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Saturday, 28 October 2017

Espionage

An invisible spyglass is watching you dear.
No matter whether you are far or near.

A spy is watching your get-up, attitude and dress.
Girls behave right else you you will face the punishments. 
Skewing social dogma is considered as a curse
and the spy has noted that you have done that mess.

Sleepless eyes are guarding my motherland.
Firearms have been held strong in their hand.
The espionage has also trespassed
to turn that sturdy ground into a  quicksand.

A pair of eyes are watching you in the busiest road.
Checking your everyday fashion, changes in your representation.
They are saying it is a step to provide your better safety.
They don't bother if it records your moods or what you have board.


A pair of hidden eyes are watching you in hostel room.
Don't get over confident to see all the glitters of a posh area,
it is watching you in lavatory and in trail-room.   
So that bidding of your body and soul can be eased in global market soon.

No matter how far or where you go.
You can never come to know.
Unwanted espionage is an inevitable thing
and it is unstoppable from its bad habit to follow. 

What are you talking about? 
Ah!!!! about individual secrecy and public rights. 
Those things you have to forgo. 
Otherwise, they will drive you slow. 


76 comments:

  1. I really like how your blog tackles tough topics head on! Your voice is powerful and needed.

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  2. This is great poetry, Jagriti! It's kind of actually scary, right? When you know that your every move is tracked. CCTV cameras everywhere. GPS tracking, and so on. Then, there's the so-called online stalkers. You have no idea how this resonates to me, Jagriti. Keep writing!

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    1. Thanks for your appreciations.. Ya.. I sometimes it feels so scary and devastating when you discover that you are getting tracked all day long... Whatever you do is being recorded all the time this kind of possibility is so disgusting..

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  3. Love the feel behind the poem and how it is about real issues. Can't wait to read the next one.

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  4. I love poetry! Your topic is insightful and this is well written! Thank you for sharing!

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  5. This poem is really good and chilling! This is so relevant today.

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  6. Deep and interesting.. Thumbs up and keep it up. poem is not easy at all, it requires a lot of thinking and is not something everybody can do.

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    1. Thank you.. Just tried to join the dots of real life issues with a rhythm...

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  7. Wow great poem, your writing is so different and easy to read.

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    1. Thank you.. :) Thanks for investing your precious time to read my poetry..

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  8. Beautiful poetry, so deep and meaningful, really makes me think! Keep up the awesome work!

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    1. Thank you.. Encouragements from my appreciators are something that keeps me going..

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  9. beautiful lines on spying..how easily you have drafted it in your own words.

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  10. This is a great poem. I am always so amazed and impressed by people who master words so well that they came up with poetry! I wish I was talented enough to do that too!

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  11. Such a heartfelt poem and love how you have used the words so touching.

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  12. This is beautifully written and really made me think!! So good!

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  13. What an amazing piece of poetry, you have captured the reality so well in your words. World is not the same anymore.

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    1. Ya.. The world and its dwellers are not the same that they used to be.. No one knows which matter cause problematic circumstances...

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  14. This is beautiful poetry. I admire people who write like you! You're so talented. There's nothing better than words to help express our thoughts.

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  15. what a great poem is that.Wow this is something I am intetested.Keep posting blog like this..so inspiring

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  16. Food for thought, Jagriti! just realized too that words and swords rhymes. Wish I had that skill!

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  17. I love this amazing and great poem,So many awesome lines. Looking forward to check your new article.

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  18. This is head on poetry! The underlying message is a strong one that so many fail to comprehend and respond to.

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  19. Such a huge issue, tackled so beautifully in couple of words. You are good. Keep writing!

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  20. Wow, you are very talented! I really enjoy reading your poetry. I can tell it all comes from the soul.

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  21. We have entered a phase of life where non of us has anything called a private space. We think we are safe but with all this linking of personal information one is like an open book for advertisers to target and get the better of us - Beautifully written poem

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    1. Thank you.. Ya, actually every aspect of our life is going to be an open secret in few years..

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  22. Such a strong voice, you do a great job having emotions shine through your words. Keep it up, it is the real deal.

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    1. Thank you so much... :) Now a days unnecessary surveillance in everywhere is chocking our life and freedom..

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  23. This is such an awesome poem. I really like every meaning of the words. Keep it up.

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  24. First of all i must say i LOVEEE your blog. I love this poem . It's very deep and interesting. Good job.

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  25. For one, I love the poem and the topic in which it discusses. Very important and thorough thoughts on this subject. I like it a lot.

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  26. Well written poetry. Eeek, makes me wonder now how much more I don't know about who's watching what and who's knowing what!!! Yikes, kind of freaky to think about.

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    1. Thanks.. :)Ya.. this is so.. I also feels like that whenever I give a think about this I also feels similar things..

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  27. That is really well written poetry and good topic! You are talented.

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  28. Beautiful poetry and so eerily accurate. I love your take on such an interesting and concerning reality. You have talent!!

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  29. I really love this Poem, Very well written and so beautiful. You are awesome, and you really got talent!

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  30. Wow you wrote this... What a great poetry. Well written

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  31. This was amazing. your choice of words <3

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  32. Great poem! Very well written, creepy aaaand very relevant in today's age!

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  33. This is so well written, love the sharp of it!

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  34. This poem is so well written and interesting to read. It was really awesome reading it.

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  35. I'm not particularly good in deriving poems, but this seem like a pretty scary one, with all the stalking and spying!

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  36. Ya ... Tried to portray the scary experiences of those unwanted surveillance in our life.. Thank you..

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  37. This is great, you really do have a talent. And you're right, surveillance in our life is indeed scary!

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  38. It takes a influential person to bring these types of things to light. Great work.

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