They are saying this red dress isn't for me.
A fairer lady can look beautiful wearing it only.
Mom, you didn't ever crushed your daughter's spree.
Am I really beautiful? or you had lied to me !
They are saying this gown isn't for me.
To look good in that dress I have to become more skinny.
Mom, you used to say, "my beautiful princess is she".
They are saying that diamond tiara is not for me.
How can such priced piece suit to a monkey faced lady??
But for you mom, I was more priced than any gem or jewelry.
Am I really valuable mom? or you had lied to me !
You all time nurtured and valued my inner quality.
You believed it has nothing to do with my beauty.
Am I really priceless mom? or you had lied to me !
Beautiful words, mom never lied about it and so true you are a unique and amazing person. Great post!
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DeleteVery beautiful poem. Self identity has always been a long lasting issue in the world. We're beautiful if only we look beyond our flaws.
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DeleteBeautiful words and I think you are raising such a good point. Shaming of all types are wrong and affects us all differently. I agree with the fact no one is beautiful if it means destroying others in the process.
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