A ray of dim sunlight is entering in my room.
May this be capable enough to erase the gloom.
The precious childhood are ruining under expectations.
Can they ever get a touch of gentle rejuvenation?
Let pledge to that first beam of light
to make their life and smile more bright.
Some group of people tolerate daily humiliation
because they are not happy enough with their gender orientation.
The whole world is making laugh at them and
abusing them as they intending to undergo transformation.
Can this ray bring any difference in that situation?
Old age homes are inundating with growing number of elders.
Lacking the much needed love from their family mates.
As those family members are busy to be social crusaders
on social networks and time for family is something what lacks.
Can this ray of light is powerful enough to change those fates?
People are forgetting their duties of safeguarding
our mother nature everyday.
Can this ray of hope be helpful to
change this mentality in anyway?
Women of that forbidden land are foiling the chances
of violence and crimes on another lady.
But the society is lacking the interest to
treat them with proper attitude and solidarity.
Let pledge the light to brighten the life the lives of those women
which is the urgent necessity.
A sensitive poem drawing attention to the issues and ills plaguing our society today!
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DeleteYou poem gave me goose bumps the words are so beautiful. I wish with all my heart that the ray of light does bring peace, comfort and understanding to the world
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DeleteWhat a beautiful poem. Unfortunately the world is in a continuous change and we are unable to stop it. Yes, we are destroying the environment but soon things will change and we will protect it. Yes, we forget about our families but in the end we turn back to them.
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DeleteThat's a beautiful poem! I hope that 'hope love and peace' wins in the end.
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DeleteJagriti this is such an emotional poem and with such a touchy words but with the reality of what is going on these days in our society.
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DeleteVery compelling piece! Beautifully written. I hope that things in this world will get better!
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DeleteVery emotional poem! I liked how you introduced the sunlight at the beginning and then used it in the whole poem. Well written!
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DeleteBeautifully written, your poems always give great awareness of sensitive and serious situations and make me think. I like the positivity of the ray of sunlight message.
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DeleteThis is so beautiful poem, you always express the sensitivities of the situation described so beautifully. I wish the ray of light does bring peace, comfort and understanding to the world.
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DeleteWhat a beautiful poem. We need light and hope these days.
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DeleteBeautiful poem full of emotions and passion. Let the light of hope shine down!
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DeleteVery nicely written poem with in-depth feelings and emotions. Without Ray of light we cannot imagine our existence on this planet.
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DeleteVery well written. Your poem speaks important and sometimes hard to understand truths about the world we live in today.
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DeleteLoved it Jagriti...That line about elders deserving to be respected and loved more tugged at my heartstrings...cannot wait to read more.
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DeleteI love poetry I was very moved regarding your line about old age homes are being filled with people that are neglected by their family members that don't have the time to show them love.
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DeleteSuch a beautiful written poem which I found really moving and emotional. Particularly when you mentioned those in old age homes. Really touched me.
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DeleteThis is such a beautiful and powerful poem, there is so much hate and "I don't care attitude" in the world right now. So many times I wonder if we can still get it right and live a peaceful life. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through this powerful poem.
ReplyDeleteThe world is getting inundated with such self-centric people. But sometime they fail to make out that they are harming themselves indirectly.
Deletethis really makes one think about how our actions and thoughts shape the universe. negativity begets negativity, and positivity begets positivity. at the end of the day, we are all human with desires, fears, aspirations, and love. sometimes it takes humility to admit one's fears or lack of understanding, and rather than feel vulnerable, one can lash out against his fellow human
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DeleteWhat a lovely poem to read. In particular I love the line, "A ray of dim sunlight is entering in my room.
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DeleteHope derives our lives. Hope for beautiful future brings smile on shriveled faces going under harsh realities of present. Beam of hope is all to clutch to. Emotional poem beautifully curated.
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