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Sunday, 19 November 2017

Soul of Soil

Keep your feet upon it, a wet layer will touch you.
A connection with your root can be felt too.
The root of you and the whole world is connected through.
But you never mind to pollute it.
Stinking garbage is standing tall on its feet.
No greenery is there to retain the soil fit.

Closely standing skyscrapers are taking its test.
This layer of soil is bearing much weight on its chest.
The planning of such terrible wrong are being done in jest.
 No one is caring to admit the prevailing threat.

A little tremble from the inner crust of soil
may cause a catastrophic turmoil.
That day everything will face a maximum spoil.
Nothing can be rejuvenated then even after a hard toil.
A little lash of river wave will be enough
for taking the portion of land to engulf.
In those days retaining such hard earned modernized
creation and civilization will be really tough.       

60 comments:

  1. Such a beautiful poem and I love the message and meaning behind it. We need to look after our planet as a world, starting with the things we often overlook the easiest. Great work <3

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    1. We are ignoring our connection with the nature every time now a days and this is going to be proved much threatening to us..

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  2. Such a short poem that captures so much that needs to be accomplished in this world. Beautifully created.

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  3. What a nice poem and the photos go so well together with the words. Thank you for creating and sharing.

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    1. Thank you dear.. I am so glad to hear that readers are liking my poetry.. :)

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  4. How true is this. So funny. When I was in Minsk, I was dying to plant my bare foot on their naked ground just to take in the place and to let it root in me. This post is reminiscent of that. Yes pollution does kill the vibe.

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    1. Today we are dying to enjoy some connection with our mother nature and soil is the way of connecting us with the nature..

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  5. Barefoot on the ground makes us feel more personal to our earth and nature. This is a very nice poem.

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  6. Such a beautiful and meaningful poem, so true. We need to take good care of our mother nature before it's too late.

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    1. Yep.. Thank you for reading my poetry..😊

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  7. Occasionally writing poetry myself, I really appreciate the beauty of this piece. And the message is one that we should be daily reminded of. Well done!

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    1. Thank you so much for your appreciation. It really feels great when a poet gets appraisal from another poet.. 😊

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  8. What an amazing poetry, Nature is an important part of our being, we need to take care of it, for us and for coming generations.

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  9. Such a beautiful poem! It's so sad how people forget how nature is important and how we couldn't live without it.
    I love how images are accompanying the poem, so beautiful and touching!

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    1. Thank you for investing your time for my writing.. 😊 It is an urgent need to do something for our nature otherwise it will be too late.

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  10. Nice poetry I like visiting your blog and seeing what you have created each time. The photos go together nicely!

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  11. Wow this is beautiful..we always take nature for granted but we need to take care of it as well!

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    1. Yap.. Otherwise we will have to pay for it when it will be too late to do something..

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  12. Beautiful! We take nature for granted sometimes. It's good to take your shoes off and feel the ground every once in awhile.

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  13. So true on so many levels. We really do take it for granted. Not only that, but we've lost our natural connection to the earth, the trees, the oceans, etc. - all such an essential part of our world.

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    1. Sometimes we don't bother at all to exploit our nature and this is the prime cause of loosing our connection with mother nature..

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  14. I love it! Nature is something that many people take for granted we need to take better care of Mother Earth. We need to show our children to do the same.

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    1. Yes.. I completely agree with you..

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  15. Very deep and profound. The beginning part reminds me that we are all connected to the earth and that we have to treat it well.

    Nicole V

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  16. Beautiful words and i like the the title of it because it gets people's attention!

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    1. Thank you so much for reading my poetry.. It feels so great when people appreciates my writing..:)

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  17. You are such a talented writer! Would love to read more of your poems. Love the message!

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    1. I am so glad that a talented blogger like you have started liking my poetry. :) It influence me to keep going.. Thank you very much..

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  18. I love your writing style! Very deep in every words and meaningful! Such a unique talent!

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    1. Thank you so much.. :) I am feeling honored to know that my readers are loving my work..

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  19. Profoundly deep poem despite the length. Reminds me of when I was little and would walk barefoot in the grass, but so afraid now because of all I know.

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    1. Even I can remember the childhood days of mine when I used to play on ground barefoot.. But now I can not find enough such places for children so that they can feel attached with our nature.

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  20. Emotional poem with beautiful message. Touching deep layers of my inner.

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  21. Great poem, beautiful words. <3 Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Thank you so much.. :) Such appreciations from my readers are influence of my writing..

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  22. This is a very lovely poem! More awereness for nature is always welcome and your poem a great way

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  23. This is a beautiful poem and very meaningful too. I agree, we do need to take care of mother nature before it is too late.

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    1. If we failed to take any measure on time the world will face devastation in far future.. Thank you so much for your appreciations.. :)

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  24. This is so lovely. I want to write more creative prose, I used to write it every day! I've just been so busy and exhausted lately!

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    1. Thank you.. :) I hope you will restart to write your creative prose very soon..

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  25. Beautifully composed ! You have elevated soil - a very important component of our life on Earth and yet not thought about much!

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    1. Yes soil is an inevitable part of our life and well-being.. Thank you for investing your on my poetry.. :)

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  26. What a beautiful little poem! Nicely written! :)

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  27. I love this poem. Youv've inspired me to start writing again.

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    1. Its my pleasure that my work is acting as someone's inspiration..

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  28. I love your poem, it’s very well written. Thanks for sharing this.

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  29. What a beautiful short poem. Thank you for sharing!

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  30. Gone are the days where kids get to run around, feet touching the earth instead of cement. I hope that one day, something can be done to the pollution on earth, in the sea, and something can be done to break down the toxic waste.

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