She hasn't chosen silence, silence has chosen her.
She wanted to be vivacious and naive,
she wanted to be surrounded with love.
But, it is not always true for all to be supported by their star.
She hasn't chosen silence, silence chosen her.
Whenever she tried to hug tightly her love,
she felt the indifference from their side.
Failure of her repeated attempts has turned her hopes blur.
She hasn't chosen silence, silence has chosen her.
Whenever she tried to minimise the distance,
she attacked with insult and vehement ignorance.
Gradually, she started to believe there is really nobody to care.
She hasn't chosen silence, silence has chosen her.
Whenever, she believed that she will get someone
beside her to support though she witnessed something else.
Thus, the route of her destiny becomes much clearer.
She hasn't chosen silence, silence has chosen her.
Whenever, she tried to put her jovial self
in front of others, they reminded her she is a mismatch.
Thus, silence and mystery happily and quite obviously engulfed her nature.
What a powerful poem, it made me feel very sad for the girl that she felt that way. Very well written.
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DeleteBeautifully written Jagriti, it gave me goose bumps. Good poetry always seems to do that to me. So sad
ReplyDeleteThank you so much dear Michelle :) Your words are so inspiring.:)
DeleteI felt so sad that the world can change someone's nature so much. It is a strong and beautiful poem, so real.
ReplyDeleteYes, sometimes it changes one's character totally. Thanks for reading my work. :)
DeleteWow, what a powerful poem. I'm sure many can relate to the feelings of the narrator.
ReplyDeleteI too think that many girl can relate their life with this. Thanks for your nice review. :)
DeleteVery well written! Love it❤️
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Deleteজাগৃতি, আপনার কবিতা পড়লাম, মন ছুঁয়ে গেল। তা আপনি বাংলায় লেখেন না?
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It feels great whenever I get such beautiful review from my readers. :)
DeleteI love the writing here. Your thoughts are too deep and I love it!
ReplyDeleteI love the writing here. Your thoughts are too deep and I love it!
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DeleteLovely poem. it's really sad that surroundings can affect one's nature to such an extent.
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Thank you so much for your comments. I am so sorry for my unintentional late reply. I will surely visit your blog and poetry. Thank you. Much Love. :)
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