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Saturday, 13 January 2018

A Letter To Him

Hi my love, wherever you are right now.
You will have to take some important vow.

Since my childhood days I was being told,
how a girl should get fit into a girly mold.
Otherwise, it will be harder for her parents to 
tag her as praiseworthy and she could not have been sold.

But, I have trust on you, whoever you may be.
You will definitely be the one who will set my soul free. 
Just like the shrubs are taken cared by a big tree.
You will come to my life to add up some glee.

Since my childhood days I was being told,
why it is important to be fit into a girly mold.
As my intentions and mindset were always bold.
So, the perception of the society regarding me was always cold.



But, my inner-voice is hopeful enough 
that you, as my future partner, are not going to be so tough.  
We will take it to the higher position of that graph,
comprising our happiness, celebrations and each little staff. 

Since my childhood days I was being told,
how girls should abide by every little curve of that girly mold.
It was known to me from day one that
you are the decider of my fate irrespective of how much I am old.

I never thought you as a tyrant decider of my fate.
According to my dream, you will be the one
with whom all of my dreams can have been met.
For whom, living life with his beloved one will be the ultimate goal,
and the rules and regulations of a women's behavior will not be pre-set.

I have a strong belief on my intuition.
You can never be just an illusion.
I belief, one day in my life I will come across with you,
and that day my love and life will find a certain destination. 


44 comments:

  1. VEry strong and powerful poem. I took form it that is't about how society sees women in the wifely roles, but how we have changed and grown to become our own breaking free of the mold we were designed for. The struggles we face in marriages now due to that, and the acceptance we long for.

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    1. Sometimes, it becomes just a unending longing of lifetime for many of us. In that situation we feel so left alone despite of being with thousands of people..

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  2. Very powerful poem and so perfect for the times we live in. I am frilled about what is happenning now all over the world, with women empowering movements, the future looks bright and it is about a time.

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    1. But sometimes empowerment doesn't guaranty the stability of mind that comes from the inner peace of human being which is totally inspired by the people with whom we are surrounded in our life.

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  3. This is beautiful! You WILL find him someday and it will be amazing.

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    1. Awww!! It's so nice of you.. Thank you..

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  4. This is stunning. You deserve to find him and other women deserve to listen to this message.

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    1. Thank you dear.. Yes, then only the can relate this situation with one another and that will make us stand with one another at-least in one point.

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  5. This is beautiful, so moving and powerful. You have a real talent here.

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    1. It's my pleasure.. Thank you dear for reading my poetry.. :)

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  6. This was a beautiful poem. I am always so impressed at people who can write poems, they are so talented. I am sure you will find him!

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    1. Thank you so much for reading my poetry and all of your appreciations. It's all my readers positive views that keeps me going.

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  7. Beautiful poem! I feel impressed and inspired. I hope you will be able to find your soul mate soon. You are really talented.

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    1. Thank you so much dear.. I am feeling so loved after going through your comment.. :)

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  8. This is very lovely. I would love to share this with my friends who are also looking for their soulmates! I can't wait til you find yours, I'm sure he will be worth the wait.

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    1. It is my greatest pleasure that you have find this writing worthy to share with your friends..I am feeling so accomplished after coming across with so much love from you people.

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  9. Beautiful and thought provoking, you have such a wonderful style. It is always a joy to read your poems, keep up the great work :)

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    1. Thank you so much dear for reading all my poetry.. I am always grateful to my readers like you who never feel bored to read my work. Your positive words are that driving force that keeps my pen going..

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  10. This is so beautiful! My favorite subject, too. We have similar writing styles and now I feel inspired to write again. Such a great poem. Thanks so much for sharing!

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    1. It's my pleasure of getting some readers from my genre of work. I think, the reviews from you will make my journey more interesting.

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  11. Such a beautiful and meaningfull poem. Wish I could write poems too!

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  12. Love and life. Such a beautiful feel with your equally pearly words to express it.

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    1. Thank you mam.. I am feeling so honored to get appreciated from such an experienced journalist from you.

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  13. This is beautiful. Sounds like poetry or art. Very nice read and sentimental. I enjoyed it.

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    1. It is always nice to hear some positive reviews from my readers.. Thank you so much.. :)

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  14. This is a lovely little letter, I used to love writing poems like this. I may get back into this x

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    1. Oh sure, and I really think that a talented blogger like you will definitely shine in this field too. Thank you so much for reading mine.

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  15. What a beautiful and touching letter. You write so well that it sounded like poetry. Absolutely love it.

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    1. I am so glad to hear that you have enjoyed my poetry and s thanks a lot for all of your lovely appreciations.

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  16. This is such a touchy and sweet poem. and very well-written. You really did a great job.

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  17. A touching poem and we can all identify with it...You write so well..looking forward to hearing more poems of yours.

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    1. It is so thrilling to hear that my readers are looking forward to read more from me. Nothing can be more joyous than this honor.. Thank you so much..

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  18. What a beautiful poem. I'm confident one day you will find your soul mate with faith like this :)

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    1. Thank you so much dear. I hope all your good wishes come true one day in my life. #finger_crossed

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  19. This is a very open and honest poem. Definitely beautiful wrote, I am sure you will definitely find someone! Thank you for sharing your creative and beautiful piece.

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    1. Thank you so much for reading my poetry. I am feeling so much in love to know your good wishes for me and my future. XOXO :)

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  20. Emotions made it easy to come up with this beautiful poem. Hopefully that soul will find its way to you, Hopefully you'll recognize him as much as he will know about you, may you both find each other's love in God's perfect time and enjoy life together in the love of delight.

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    1. That day will be among one of the most favorite days in my life. I hope your sincere wishes and love will come true one day.. Thank you so much..

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  21. Lovely poem and it addresses one of my pet peeves. I know that whatever it is you seek in a soul mate will be manifested soon. Don't lose hope.

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    1. I am feeling so positive now regarding this after coming across with all the love from my reader's corner. Thank you so much for reading and making me more optimistic. :)

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