Everyday in her life was the same.
There was no one around her to blame.
Actually it was her fate that turns out to be rude.
Otherwise, no one has the gut to tolerate such attitude.
Everyday in her life was the proof.
There are something in his tenure which was a goof.
It was a shuttering truth for her that
her life's journey was facing a terrible wrath.
Everyday of her life was a pain.
There is no chance to have some gain.
No one ever cared about the cause of her grudge
though there was many people out there to judge.
Everyday of her life was an exam.
Though there was no chance for any other to see any harm.
She was quite tired of all this drama and toil.
It was beyond her thoughts how can the society be so cruel.
Everyday of her life was an irony.
That makes laugh at her lifelong agony.
No one ever came forward to stand by.
Everybody out there was eager to make her cry.
Everyday of her life was a harsh interview.
Everyday she faced same questions, there were nothing new.
For the ruthless society she was just like a devil's incarnation.
She herself and the society too were much eager
for her faster journey to the ultimate destination.
nice.
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DeleteThis poem made me feel quite sad. Sad that people feel like this in the world. I felt the pain. I really resonated with the "No one ever cared about the cause of her grudge
ReplyDeletethough there was many people out there to judge."
Yes, there are many people out there who are facing such emotional negligence all the time. I really feel for them.
DeleteThis is very well written! Sad though that people go through this on a regular basis.
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DeleteWhat an amazing writing Jagriti, I can very well feel this. She has always been left alone and never cared about, her fate and her destiny are all the same, hope someone understands her and she will be alive and happy again.
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DeleteThis poem is really deep and beautiful. I can feel the words your wrote. Our society can be very cruel. I think a lot.if people can relate to the feelings in this poem
ReplyDeleteAt some point our society is not only cruel but also it is much insensible too, especially towards those who need it the most.
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DeleteSeems like her life was full of pressure. I gusss that is lifevthough because we all live with it which makes this poem relatable. What’s important is how you let it settle and if the pressure changes how a person responds to mete living.
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